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The Spectre of Love
| Posted on January 29, 2011 at 4:28 AM |
At first I know nothing that there exist
This kind of feeling that keeps to persist
I can't do anything that it still insist
Can't help myself even to resist
It hadn't stop so I tried to fight
Even I'm ignorant whether its wrong or right
It lets me to think through sleepless nights,
I lost my appetite, didn't eat even for a pint
Now it made me weak then I tried to hide
"stop messing with me, Oh please!", I cried
One has offered me a ton of guide,
"It's alright. I'm fine. I can make it.", I lied
I am one of those, whom this love have haunted
Trapped in a loop, even myself have shunted
It passed by me, made me feel what is hatred
And left me alone, feeble, and fragmented
Writer's log:
I started to write this poem around 1:45 in the afternoon, January 29, 2011 - just have nothing to do. I finished it at 3:04. What took me long in writing it is the second-to-the-last line. I am not even sure of that line, honestly, not satisfied.
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10 Comments
lili says...
it was so nice to read this kind of poem..
it was amazing
hello there!
thank you for reading the poem. And I want to show my gratitude as you show your appreciation for my poem.
again, thanks!
when ang continuation sa short storyy?ahah.
regarding sa poem making, just be spontaneous. the best poems are made when you're bolstered by deep emotions.
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yeah, I can't deny it. ahehe., sa kanta pa ni Aiza Seguerra, "Pagdating ng Panahon" ahehe.
hehe.
naahh. u'r not d only one who's in desperate need of unique words. im also needing d help of mr webster at some point. ahaha
aw, np. it's because ur works r worthy of praises mn sad!
haha. u mean, got entangled before? wow! was it really magical? [aheheh]
i agree! it wil certainly come at the most appropriate time. as what we were taught and being told about.
with words. I knew or I have heard those words before. But I forgot their meaning, since I don't use them regularly. In fact, I have a dictionary beside me when I was writing this poem. Ahehe.. I'm trying to be a poet, though I'm not. Ahehe.. Again, I appreciate your praises. Thanks!
re: P.S. That was before, not now. Ahehe. But if it will come, why not? ahehehe...
emo na poem?hehehe.
grabe ang rhyme bai. ja q galisod nah. hehe bt u just got the words cohere.
mmm. take note of the time it has been written,dalia ra kayu uy! waw.
nevertheless, poet na keu kaw nel!
xada.
P.S. don't get too entangled wid the so-called 'love'
hahee pwo atik wruh! :]
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